'Too Claudish': drop the aside ('the gotchas no doc confesses') and the
simile ('watches it fall'); lead with the constraint itself. Facts
unchanged: exclusive dialog, scouts before ask, Esc ends the run, the
ledger survives.
'Too Claudish': drop the aside ('the gotchas no doc confesses') and the
simile ('watches it fall'); lead with the constraint itself. Facts
unchanged: exclusive dialog, scouts before ask, Esc ends the run, the
ledger survives.